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Directions: For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composi

 

Fast Food in ChinaDirections:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition in three paragraphs. You are given the first sentence or part of the first sentence of each paragraph. Your part of the composition should be no less than 120 words, not including the words given. Remember to write clearly.

Fast Food in ChinaThere are at present two kinds of fast food in China:———————————————.————————————————————————————————————————

——————————————————————————————————————--——.The word “fast-food” seems to be introduced into China after reform.————————

.——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————--——.Chinese fast food suits the Chinese better than western’s.————————————

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【范文】Fast Food in ChinaThere are at present two kinds of fast food in China: Chinese fast food and Western fast food. They both have advantages and disadvantages.

The word “fast-food” seems to be introduced into China after the reform①. The government permits foreign companies to do their business in China. So nowadays there are in China many western fast food companies, such as MacDonald’s, K.F.C and Pizza Hut. Western fast food has its own characteristics and attracts the children very much, for it has the special cultural background which some young people or children like very much. Chinese fast food has a better taste, but because it is ill-managed and ineffective②, the business is not so thriving③ as the western ones and fewer people go there.

Chinese fast food suits the Chinese better than western’s. If Chinese fast food adopts the advanced management system and keeps more traditional culture of its own, our fast food will get the upper hand④ in the competition.

【注释】①reform：此处指我国的经济改革②ineffective：无效的；效率不高的③thrive：繁荣；兴旺；欣欣向荣④get the upper hand：占上风【点评】本文是一篇根据段首句提示展开的三段式论说文。

标题“Fast Food in China”就是文章的论题第一段根据段首句的提示在总结两种快餐方式的基础上指出两者互有利弊，而正是这一点可使文章增添新意并且突出了中心“论点”第二段在此基础上进行深入发展，指出两者的实力各自所在，并举出实例加以证明。

第三段统领全文，指出我们不必崇洋媚外，中国特色必将获胜，但需引入先进的管理机制三段不是各自为政，而是相互联系、相辅相成的，都统一到标题“Fast Food in China”的门下文章最后一段是结论，是对全文的说明与强化。

在第一段中，作者提到两种快餐在文章结尾时，作者从行文上再次表明自己的态度，即“中式”必将胜过“西式”这样，就做到了行文的前后呼应，使文章结构紧凑，内容完整作者行文时，善于运用一些简单的语言进行论述，这种避难就易的做法也值得我们——特别是词汇量不够丰富的读者学习。

参考文献：英语作文高分必背丛书：大学英语四级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005

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